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__**Oral comments**__

1-3 Caroline Good, fluent, perhaps too fast - comes in bursts. Try to speak more smoothly.

BraZIL the first economic plan > one of the world's top economies a chance to success > a chance to succeed OR a chance for success

4 Cécile Somewhat hesitant, not good when you read slides

Chicago > first sound sh like ship public > u like duck insecurity > security problems determinated > determined to explain you > to explain to you

9 Safa Don't read! Quite a few grammatical errors

very beautifuls landscape > very beautiful landscapes one of the world most renowned cities in the world > one of the world's most renowned cities endless > e like bed so why they will organise this event > why will they organise this event 25 millions dollars > 25 million_ dollars it's a big montant > it's a large sum where it will be organised the FIFA world cup > where the FIFA world cup will be organised

11 Agnès You sound as though you are reading - try not to, because it's hard to understand.

drawback lives > i like construction law > o like call

12 Nicolas Good delivery - good volume, speed. Many grammatical errors, and watch your 'th'

China > i like I, eye August > o like call economical problems three importants elements th: we can see that (not thee that)

__**Presentation Corrections**__ Slide 2: Presentation Threats __to__ Brazil Chances __of__ Success

Slide 3: 31__st__ __O__lympic __G__ames __was__ chosen Copen__hagen__

Slide 7: opening and closing __ceremonies__

Slide 11: threats __to__ Brazil __need to construct__ roads... aut__h__orities $10 billion

Slide 12: chances __for__ success __the__ greatest opening no place

Slide 13: chances __for__ success we __had__ 3 important events